Your site looks good. Your write ups are a little thin. Try to do a bit more thought and analytic writing about your experiences. And be sure to include at least 1 photo with every post. You can check out Sergio & LIa for some examples of nice work:
http://sergiomelendrez.wordpress.com/
http://liaagiordano.wordpress.com/
Thank you Rachel – see you on Thursday!
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